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STAR TREK: DISCOVERY 1x13 - "The End, Part 1" on Page Six

#1 User is offline   Glenn Icon

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Posted 01 June 2008 - 04:18 PM

This is a project I've been working on for a little while now...

Basically, annoyed at the lack of new Star Trek on telly, I started to write my own series. I've already finished eleven episodes, am halfway through episode twelve and have planned out a total of four seasons of thirteen episodes each... basically, I went a little nuts.

In the next few days I'll have finished Season One and thought, with it complete, I'd share it with you guys.

The only drawback is, well... there's a lot of it. I don't want to eat up everybody's time by posting up gigantic chunks of story (because, for example, an entire episode runs to roughly nine pages of a Word document, or 5,000 words). Therefore, what I thought I'd do is post up an episode list and brief description... kinda like a pre-release promotional thing to see if you like the sound of it. If you don't, don't worry, but if you'd be interested, I'll start posting episodes.

So, without further ado...

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Created By Glenn Scully

Based Upon Star Trek Created By Gene Roddenberry


Premise:
The year is 2372. One of the furthest outposts of the Federation, Starbase 499 in the Sirrustra System, is under attack. Literally at the edge of known space, deep within the uncharted Beta Quadrant, they are alone and calling for help. Scrambled to render aid, the newly-constructed USS Discovery NCC-76240 is pushed out of Spacedock early, and her young Captain must pull his disjointed crew together to meet a faceless enemy and explore the unknown...


Cast of Characters:

Intrepid-Class USS Discovery NCC-76240, Federation Starship
- Captain Josiah "Jed" Graves (human male)
- First Officer: Commander Valerie Archer (human female)
- Helm: Lieutenant Mitan (Bolian male)
- Operations: Ensign Jason Allenbach (human male)
- Engineering: Lieutenant Commander Sakal (Suliban male)
- Medical: Doctor T'Pri (Vulcan female)

Other characters include Ensign Sam Hunter (introduced in "Forward" [DIS]) and Nurse Carla Kenyon

Starbase 499, Federation Outpost
- Rear Admiral Leo "Boxer" Quarren (human male)
- Station Master Erica Mendoza (human female)

Starships assigned to Starbase 499 include the Oberth-Class USS Spearhead NCC-1224, the Miranda-Class USS Westminster NCC-2799 and the Steamrunner-Class USS Steamrunner NX-52126 (introduced in "Steamrunner" [DIS])


Episode List:

Season One
1x01: "This Corner of Space"
1x02: "Steamrunner"
1x03: "First Impressions"
1x04: "War"
1x05: "Forward"
1x06: "Our Own Problems"
1x07: "Face Value, Part 1"
1x08: "Face Value, Part 2"
1x09: "Healing"
1x10: "Command Decision"
1x11: "Weathering the Storm"
1x12: "Safety"
1x13: "The End, Part 1"

Season Two
2x01: "The End, Part 2"
2x02: "Assistance"
2x03: "Westminster Chimes"
2x04: "The Team"
2x05: "Downtime"
2x06: "Return"
2x07: "Revolution, Part 1"
2x08: "Revolution, Part 2"
2x09: "Natural Disturbance"
2x10: "Callsheet"
2x11: "Pain"
2x12: "Determination of Spirit"
2x13: "Tempus Futile, Part 1"

Season Three
3x01: "Tempus Futile, Part 2"
3x02: "Virus"
3x03: "Leap of Faith"
3x04: "Connection Lost"
3x05: "Alone"
3x06: "Old Debts"
3x07: "The Way Things Were, Part 1"
3x08: "The Way Things Were, Part 2"
3x09: "The Computer"
3x10: "Rules and Regulations"
3x11: "Shurvun"
3x12: "Directive"
3x13: "Untrustworthy, Part 1"

Season Four
4x01: "Untrustworthy, Part 2"
4x02: "Hijack"
4x03: "Cloak and Dagger"
4x04: "The Fire"
4x05: "Politics"
4x06: "First Date"
4x07: "Isolation, Part 1"
4x08: "Isolation, Part 2"
4x09: "News"
4x10: "My Q to Leave"
4x11: "Shields"
4x12: "Letters from Home"
4x13: "Cancelled"
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Posted 01 June 2008 - 04:21 PM

:wow: :wow: :wow: :wow:

I think I need to change my underwear.

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Posted 01 June 2008 - 04:23 PM

View PostTerilynn, on Jun 1 2008, 05:21 PM, said:

:wow: :wow: :wow: :wow:

I think I need to change my underwear.


Is that a "yay" or a "nay"?

See, I'm about to finish Season One, like I say, and a few mates of mine want to read it, etc. but to be honest, while I've planned it all out, I'm starting to wonder about any sort of endgame with this... or a fifth season...!

I'm in two minds... would you have time to read it?
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Posted 01 June 2008 - 04:28 PM

Why don't you split the chapters and post parts of them, like two parts each day or something? That'd make it easier to read, at least for me. :)

Is Valerie Archer related to Jonathan Archer? :angel_not:

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Posted 01 June 2008 - 04:30 PM

Ooh... good idea! :thumbsup2:

View PostMrs.Picard, on Jun 1 2008, 05:28 PM, said:

Is Valerie Archer related to Jonathan Archer? :angel_not:


Read this, m'dear, it should explain.
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Posted 01 June 2008 - 04:30 PM

^ Agree with Mrs P...

I totally want to read this!

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Posted 01 June 2008 - 04:49 PM

View PostCaptain Archer, on Jun 1 2008, 06:30 PM, said:

Ooh... good idea! :thumbsup2:



Read this, m'dear, it should explain.


Ah! Thank you! This just proves once again that I know NOTHING about VOY. :laugh:


View PostTerilynn, on Jun 1 2008, 06:30 PM, said:

^ Agree with Mrs P...

I totally want to read this!


Yes, I want to read it, too. I forgot to mention that. :laugh:

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Posted 01 June 2008 - 05:29 PM

CA, sign me up...this is definitely something I'd want to read. I like the premise, and the name Discovery...very good. Also with the idea of a spacestation and a small detail ships assigned it intrigues me.

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Posted 01 June 2008 - 08:38 PM

Okay, cool...! I'm working on Episode #12 as we speak, so once I'm done I'll start posting up Episode #1 and we'll see how it goes from there!

Awesome... I have an audience! :biggrin:
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Posted 01 June 2008 - 09:25 PM

Most. Definitely. :)

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Posted 01 June 2008 - 09:55 PM

I would definately read this, especially judging by your last fic I read :biggrin:
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Posted 01 June 2008 - 10:39 PM

Aww, thanks guys! I'll get writing ASAP, hopefully post Episode #1 tomorrow morning!
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Posted 01 June 2008 - 10:49 PM

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Posted 03 June 2008 - 12:32 AM

Okay everybody... let's give this a go... hope you enjoy, and again, sorry that it's rather long!

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SEASON ONE
EPISODE ONE

“This Corner of Space”





PROLOGUE

2372.
The Beta Quadrant.
The forgotten corner of the galaxy, or so people joked.
With all the recent political excitement in the Federation, many had shifted attention away from the Beta Quadrant. Many also forgot that it was home to dozens of important galactic races, such as Vulcans, Andorians and Bolians. No, all the excitement was happening in the Alpha Quadrant. The wormhole in Bajoran space, tensions mounting between the galactic powers… nobody cared about the Beta Quadrant anymore. It was tragic for those stationed there.
Rear Admiral Leo Quarren gazed out across the stars before him with a sigh. He didn’t like this view. He preferred it when Starbase 499 rotated so that his office faced the gorgeous Class-M planet below. It reminded him of Earth, but now, here, faced with a blank starfield, he was alone with his thoughts.
It was lonely out here. Starbase 499 was one of the most extreme Federation outposts one could hope to find. Right on the edge of the Beta Quadrant, overlooking vast unknown chunks of the galaxy with the impending sense of dread that someday, something horrible would belch forth and reveal itself… Quarren shuddered. He was an old man, more grey hairs than brown these days, even in his beard. Oh, he wouldn’t trade his posting for anything else in the Starfleet, not a chance. He was in command of his own starbase, for goodness sake! And this far from Earth, he was free to manage his own little collective family. They even had a few old starships for company.
The planet below, Sirrustra II, was a beautiful world. The people were humanoid, friendly, warm and inviting. They’d been made members of the Federation pretty darn quickly, in exchange for the promise of the starbase in orbit. It was a relationship of mutual benefit… symbiosis, almost. Quarren valued it extremely highly.
Something broke his thoughts. There was a light, in the starfield beyond the bulkhead... a light that didn’t belong to a star.
And it was growing.
“Quarren to Mendoza,” the old man growled as he slapped his commbadge. “Direct your sensors out to… oh, co-ordinates 347 by 114.”
“What am I looking for, Admiral?” a female Latino voice answered from nowhere.
“You’ll see it… what is that?”
“I’m not sure. Hold on, I’ll try increasing sensor resolution.”
Little did he know that, at that point in time, the incoming light was going to change the nature of his assignment forever. Upon hearing what Station Master Erica Mendoza had to report, Quarren’s eyes went wide with fear.



ACT ONE

“Captain’s Log, Stardate: 48531.2
Under new orders from Starfleet Command, I’m taking my brand new starship to her first assignment deep within the Beta Quadrant. I’d wanted it to be under better circumstances, but to all intents and purposes this will be a rescue mission. I’m told that there is no better test for a new ship and crew, but I can’t help wishing I’d been given something a little easier during my first day on the job…”


The door chimed. The log was paused, for now.
“Enter.”
Stepping in to the Captain’s ready room, Commander Valerie Archer made an immediate impression. She always did, always had done. That was one of the main reasons why she’d made First Officer of the USS Discovery. Smiling the warm, charming smile he always told himself he would, Captain Josiah Graves motioned for her to take a seat at the desk, which she quickly did.
“Captain,” she acknowledged with a nod and a slight smile in return. “You asked me to report right away?”
“Yes, Commander… but please, call me Jed.”
That caught her off-guard. Josiah Graves was a young Starfleet Captain, and this was his first command. She’d expected something a little more laid back from the handsome thirty-something Englishman, but not first-name terms on the first day. She decided to play along. After all, he was the Captain.
“Only if you call me Valerie, sir,” she replied.
“It’s a deal. I wanted to inform you of Starfleet’s orders. I mean, I know you’ll have read the mission brief, but there’s more than meets the eye to this one.”
“Oh…?”
“What do you know?”
“Orders are to proceed to the Sirrustra System at maximum warp to render assistance to Starbase 499. We got rushed out of Spacedock pretty darn quick, Jed. Discovery is barely finished; I’ve got engineering doing what the assembly teams at Utopia Planitia should have done.”
Captain Graves leaned back in his comfortable chair. It was all true, he had to admit, they were rushed somewhat. Intrepid-Class starships were at a premium these days. Loaded with all the most up-to-date systems, the assembly teams were notoriously protective of them before they’d let anybody take them out into the final frontier. Discovery was different. Under the most classified order from Admiral Owen Paris at Starfleet Command, she’d been launched three days early.
“We got pushed out of those space doors for a reason, Valerie,” Jed admitted. “What isn’t part of the regular mission briefing is that Starbase 499 was attacked by an unknown alien entity. We’re talking the edge of known space here, Commander. Beyond Sirrustra II, we simply don’t know what’s out there… well, beyond what sensors can tell us, but I don’t have to remind you of their limitations.”
“A rescue mission, then?” Archer’s eyebrows rose as she spoke.
“I want to be prepared. It won’t make me a popular Captain, but I want to run a few battle drills as soon as possible. I don’t know what we’ll be facing out there.”
Jed’s new First Officer stood, her red-capped shoulders arching backwards with pride in her duty and anticipation of the unknown. The smile returned, despite the circumstances, and she parted with one of her trademark observations that her Academy sponsor had warned everybody about.
“That’s why we all signed on, Captain.”

Lieutenant Commander Sakal was having a crisis of confidence.
Lying in sickbay under the watchful eyes of the Vulcan Chief Medical Officer, Doctor T’Pri, and her trusted yet untried Nurse, Carla Kenyon, he recoiled in unwarranted fear. His mottled green skin was being repaired by a dermal regenerator, a completely harmless process, and yet for some reason he was apprehensive, to say the least. The Vulcan looked about fifty in Earth years, her hair still jet-black and her skin only now showing signs of age. Maybe it was just sickbay, he reasoned.
“Your fear is illogical,” was the obvious statement from T’Pri. “Your injury is superficial. I have found your people to be most resistant to such wounds.”
“I’ll be sure to let all Suliban know of your findings…” Sakal mumbled sarcastically, wishing the procedure done with. He was desperate to return to engineering. He had work to do, after all.
“What exactly happened again?” Nurse Kenyon, an attractive young woman born and raised on the Mars Colonies, asked.
“It’s these damn battle drills! How am I supposed to run engineering as Chief Engineer if every hour we down tools and play war games? We’ve got the worst deal when this ship was rushed out; we’re the ones finishing all the jobs!”
“You did not answer the question,” the Vulcan doctor noted.
Sakal rolled his blazing yellow eyes in frustration at the unceasing Vulcan logic.
“I wasn’t paying attention while recalibrating a plasma manifold. One of my team was making a mistake, and when I turned to tell him, I lost concentration. The next thing I know… well, boom.”
“Boom indeed. Your wound is healed.”
The Chief Engineer slid from the biobed and gingerly tried standing. Satisfied with the result, he thought about thanking the Doctor and the Nurse, but decided against it. He was far too busy to be nice about things. He was about to leave when the lights suddenly dimmed. A klaxon sounded. The sickbay was bathed in red.
“Now what…? Another drill…?”
“Red alert! All hands, this is the Captain. We are approaching Starbase 499, to your stations!”

“Lifesigns?”
Behind the Captain’s seat on the bridge, Ensign Jason Allenbach furiously worked his operations console. Eager to prove his worth on his first assignment, the young kid was a long way from his father’s farm in Kentucky. The image on the viewscreen had almost sent him into shock: there, rotating in orbit above Sirrustra II was Starbase 499. It had taken a beating. Debris was spinning in all directions, still after almost a day of the initial attack. There were a handful of Sirrustrian vessels trying desperately to lend a hand, but they weren’t equipped for a full-scale rescue like this.
“There are approximately one thousand people still aboard, Captain. They’re alive, for now. Life support is holding.”
“Okay… I guess we should be thankful for small blessings…” Valerie Archer nodded, getting to her feet. “Helm, move us in closer. Watch out for that debris.”
“Aye, ma’am.”
At the helm, the Bolian male Lieutenant Mitan skilfully steered the Intrepid-Class USS Discovery through the wreckage, bringing the vessel alongside Starbase 499 for ease of transport and subtlety of location.
“Their comm system is down. I can’t get a message across,” reported Jason.
Still in his seat, Captain Graves nodded, his fingers arched in contemplation. So, they’d have to do things the old fashioned way, then? No problem.
“Away team to transporter room one!”



ACT TWO

Starbase 499 was in ruins. The lighting was down, and bulkheads were ripped open by energy surges, leaving sparking ODN relays exposed. In the darkness, using palm beacons, repair crews graciously accepted the assistance of the Sirrustrian equipment as they worked long and difficult hours to get systems back up and running. One particular focus of such attention was the Station Master’s Office. It was basically the starbase version of a starship bridge, and while work was dangerous in one corner thanks to a ruptured conduit, now more than half the LCARS consoles were working. In the middle of the chaos, providing a brief few seconds of light, a transporter beam delivered four humanoid figures to the deck.
Captain Josiah Graves surveyed the damage with a grim expression. He’d seen only a few combat situations in his time. His postings always seemed to be less deadly and less exciting than most… well, not anymore. Joined by Valerie Archer, Jason Allenbach and Sakal, they ignited their own palm beacons and started to move through the wreckage strewn across the office.
“Who the Hell are you?” a voice called out.
Turning, the away team from Discovery came face-to-face with a tall, beautiful Latino woman in a Starfleet uniform. Jed stepped forward.
“I’m Captain Josiah Graves of the starship Discovery. We’re here under orders direct from Admiral Owen Paris to render aid after your distress signal.”
“Station Master Erica Mendoza,” the woman sighed, giving a very short, curt handshake before turning away. “As you can see, we’ve got our hands full, so have your people just dive in wherever you can. Captain Graves, there’s somebody who’ll want to speak with you. Follow me, please.”
Before leaving the mess of the Station Master’s Office behind, Jed leaned over to his away team and whispered a few parting orders.
“Sakal, organise repair crews, get to work on the lights first. Maybe it would help if people could see what they were doing around here. Valerie, you’re partnered with Station Master Mendoza when she gets back from… wherever we’re going. Ensign Allenbach, well, you heard the lady. Dive in.”
“Got it, Captain.”
“Good luck!”

Rear Admiral Leo Quarren stood alone. His study was, thankfully, mostly intact following the assault on the starbase. As the door gave a familiar chime behind him, he turned his weathered face only slightly. He was preoccupied with his thoughts once again, staring out across the debris field that floated past his window.
“Enter.”
Mendoza wasn’t sticking around.
“Captain Graves of the Discovery, sir. I’ll be heading back.”
The door slid shut behind her no-nonsense posture as she literally marched away to tend to the repairs. Left alone with the Rear Admiral, Jed stepped slowly forward, guessing it wouldn’t be exactly fitting to stand on ceremony. He was right, Quarren wasn’t interested in procedure. He finally turned fully from the window and surveyed the thirty-something Captain with narrow, experienced eyes.
“I’ll cut straight to the point, Graves,” he barked. “What the Hell are you doing here?”
“You weren’t made aware of our dispatch?” Jed frowned.
“No! We haven’t directly communicated with Starfleet Command for years… damn it, that distress call was the closest we’ve come to calling home! We’re too far out for such things. This, son, is the edge of known space… the real final frontier. I’ll tell you something else. Your presence isn’t required.”
“Forgive me, Admiral, but it doesn’t look that way to me.”
“One day you’ll learn, son. One day you’ll understand, but right now, I suggest you take that fancy starship of yours and leave.”
Jed walked forward even further, joining Quarren at the window. It only took him a second to pick out the right star. He’d been a stellar cartographer aboard the USS Hood several years ago: his first true passion. Pointing, he drew Quarren’s attention. The older man frowned, not understanding where the Englishman was going with this one.
“With all due respect, sir, do you see that star?”
“What about it?”
“That’s the halfway point between here and Earth. This is my first command. I’ve been pushed out of spacedock early, thrown aboard a brand new vessel I don’t even understand myself yet. I’ve got an untested crew and I’ve dragged them all this way at breakneck speed to assist you in repairs and repel whatever unknown alien force caused this mess. I had to sneak past the Romulan Star Empire and skip a corner of Klingon space to get here, endangering ourselves in the process. So again, I stress this is with all due respect, but I’m not leaving.”
“I could order you.” And it was true. It would be a binding order of dismissal.
“Then you’d have to Court Martial me too, Admiral.”
There was a silence between both men, a tense silence that formed a thick atmosphere in the air. Quarren was sizing Jed up, and likewise, the Captain was analysing his superior officer. There was only one conclusion to reach based on that little speech, and it was finally made after a good thirty seconds of silence.
“Ha ha… I like you, Graves. You’re my kind of people. Ballsy… you remind me of a younger me.”
“Thank you, sir. I’ll take that as a compliment.”
“The truth is, we don’t know who attacked us or why. We only have two starships assigned to this starbase, and they’re old, useless. An Oberth and a Miranda, and whoever attacked us were good… fast, deadly and good… if you’re going to stick around, why not make your assignment here permanent? We could use an Intrepid.”
Jed was taken aback by the sudden offer. It was as if Admiral Quarren had known him for years, like they were old friends. He had some fast thinking to do.
“Right now, why don’t we focus on getting 499 back together?” he finally suggested, sidestepping the difficult decision until later. “Then we’ll talk about future orders… if, of course, that’s okay, sir?”
“Drop the sir, Graves. My friends call me Boxer.”
“Jed.”
“Welcome to the edge of the galaxy, Jed. You’re gonna love it.”

The repairs went well. The crew of the Discovery effortlessly merged with the teams aboard Starbase 499. Within twenty-four hours, basic systems were all back together, up and running like nothing had ever happened. The clean-up would take longer. As she returned to the Station Master’s Office, Erica Mendoza had to smile. The new arrivals to the Sirrustra System certainly knew how to fit in. It probably helped that they were a new crew. Those who’d been in space aboard a starship for a long time together tended to create a family atmosphere which was tough to integrate… not these guys, she knew. These guys were ready to embrace whatever was thrown at them. Rear Admiral Quarren was right all along, they were his type of people. And that, of course, made them the type of people welcome in orbit of Sirrustra II. Rumour had it that Captain Graves was sticking around, formalising his assignment to Starbase 499. Exploring the great unknown beyond… part of Erica wished to go with them, but she was too attached to her starbase. Still, maybe one or two trips out aboard that gorgeous Intrepid-Class…
Her thoughts were broken by an alert.
One of the Ensigns working beside her hit a newly-repaired LCARS panel and turned to her with fear spread across his face.
“Sir,” he reported. “They’re back!”
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Posted 03 June 2008 - 12:33 AM

ACT THREE

“Shields to maximum, stand by all weapons!”
The viewscreen was dominated by a swarm of deadly vessels. Together they appeared as one gigantic target, but upon closer inspection they comprised of at least fifty medium-sized attack craft. Their design made their purpose clear: like shards of glass they penetrated the stars, streaking through space towards their target. Jed had never seen anything like it. None of the bridge crew had. The closest he could remember were Tholian vessels, but they were nothing compared to… these things. They all watched and waited for the inevitable shooting to begin.
“Still no response to our hails!” reported Ensign Allenbach, his young features bathed in the eerie crimson of Red alert. “They’re charging weapons!”
“Lieutenant Mitan, place us between Starbase 499 and the incoming alien fleet,” ordered the Captain, standing. “I don’t want a single shot getting past us, do you understand?”
The Bolian nodded, his hands flying across his console with years of skill and practice behind them. Jed’s gambit was simple enough. He hoped the sight of an Intrepid-Class starship would deter the aliens this time around, make the otherwise-weak Starbase 499 a less inviting target. He got his answer when the first shot struck the shields.
“Looks like we’re not a very good barrier…” observed Valerie with disappointment.
“This is one barrier that fights back,” was Jed’s reply. “Target the leading ships and fire phasers!”
Three alien vessels went down immediately. As the flame struggled to keep burning in the vacuum of space, two more were struck by blasts from the Discovery and changed their vectors. The majority of the attackers, however, kept coming.
“499 to Discovery!”
It was Rear Admiral Quarren.
“You’re going to have to do more than that!”
“Relax, sir!” Jed nearly snapped. “We’ve got more than just phaser strips on this thing, we’ll get back to you! Discovery out!”
The deck plating shook beneath their feet as more direct hits were absorbed into the shields. These aliens, whoever they were, packed quite a punch. His mind racing, Jed considered all the variables. Damn, he wished he’d had more combat experience! In desperation, having come up blank, he returned to his Captain’s chair and shot a furrowed brow towards Valerie Archer. She understood. She’d been reading up on her new commanding officer, and knew that when it came to starship combat, her role as First Officer would encompass military tactics. He certainly had the balls to shoot first and ask questions later, but often it was more subtle than that. This was a fine example.
“Tactical,” she stood, taking the centre stage. “Charge two photon torpedoes with ionic warheads and prepare to fire into the direct centre of the incoming fleet.”
“Shockwaves?” asked Jed, catching on.
“Precisely,” she replied. “Mitan, we’re going to need those fine reflexes of yours if we want to avoid getting disabled!”
“Already on it…” the Lieutenant confirmed, flashing a cheeky grin. “Evasive pattern Reed-Alpha-Nine, plotted and laid in.”
“On my order…”
The alien fleet drew closer. The lead ships were opening fire.
One of the science stations on the right of the bridge exploded in a shower of sparks.
“Steady!” yelled Valerie.
Not quite yet…
“Fire them now! Go, Mitan!”

Standing in the Station Master’s Office with their heads raised towards their viewscreen, Quarren and Mendoza had to shield their eyes as the torpedoes detonated. The brilliant white energy produced by the ionic charges jumped from vessel to vessel, knocking their weapons out instantly. The entire fleet, save for a few lucky stragglers at the edges of the attack formation, were hit. As the Discovery soared away at full impulse, avoiding the danger, the aliens slowly regrouped and began to turn away.
Quarren wasn’t giving up that easily. Punching his command access codes into the nearest terminal, he attempted to lock on a tractor beam from 449’s powerful docking emitters.
“I’m not letting those bastards get away that easily…” he swore. “Damn, why can’t I access tractor beams?”
“They’re offline, have been since the attack,” Erica sheepishly informed him. “It’s probably best to let them go, Admiral.”
“What? Gone soft on me?”
“No,” the feisty Station Master replied with a wicked grin. “If we captured them, then who would tell the rest of the unknown lifeforms out there that we’re back in business and ready to rumble?”
“Free advertising… I like it…”
The viewscreen showed the rest without need for additional comment. In a flash, as the ionic energy died away from their scorched hulls, the alien attack fleet jumped to warp, heading back for the dark corner of the galaxy from whence they came. With a satisfied smile, Quarren tapped his commbadge.
“499 to Discovery,” he growled. “Jed, get yourself over here. I owe you a drink.”

He stood on the bridge. His crew surrounded him.
For the first time since he took command of the USS Discovery NCC-76240, Captain Josiah Graves felt pride, not only pride in himself but pride in the performance of his people. They’d succeeded in their first ever mission: Starbase 499 was repaired and fully operational; Sirrustra II, one of the newest additions to the United Federation of Planets, was safe; a possible alien invasion had been averted. They’d been pushed out early, they were untried, wet behind the ears… and they’d done well.
Jed looked from face to face. Commander Valerie Archer, well, she’d turn out to be one heck of a First Officer. Lieutenant Mitan at the helm, damn, Jed had never seen flying like his. Ensign Jason Allenbach up there at Ops, what a young kid, so full of promise and adventure. Lieutenant Commander Sakal was up from engineering, smiling for one rare moment at the success of his team. Doctor T’Pri was also present, although she claimed to be passing through to suggest Jed undergo his physical… Vulcans. Maybe they did have a sense of humour after all.
“Well, guys, we did it,” he smiled, initiating a small round of applause. He waved them off gently. “I’ve got something to read, so bear with me.”
He reached for the PADD resting in his Captain’s chair and tapped a few buttons.
“To: Commander USS Discovery. From: Paris, Admiral Owen. Starfleet Command, San Francisco. Orders Encoded. You are hereby assigned to Starbase 499 in the Sirrustra System effective immediately. Report to Rear Admiral Leo Quarren for further instruction regarding your mission brief: to explore the uncharted sectors of the Beta Quadrant. Clear horizons. End.”
More applause broke out, accompanied by a bridge filled with happy faces.
“There’s no doubt about it, guys,” Jed managed to continue. “This is the furthest edge of known space. We’re on our own out here. No running back to Earth every time we need a new paint job, understood?”
There were nods of understanding, nods that he joined in with.
“As we’ve already seen, it can get dangerous around here. We’ll be regularly returning to Starbase 499, using it like a launch pad. With their rickety old starships in the hanger, they’ve got no chance if we’re off charting some nebula and those aliens, or worse, come knocking. But I’ll tell you one thing. I have faith in each and every one of you. I have faith in Rear Admiral Quarren and his people. I have faith in the Sirrustrian people down on the planet. Together, we’re going to shape this corner of space.”
A pause, for dramatic effect. Jed secretly loved giving this little speech of his.
“So what are we waiting for?”



EPILOGUE

The fleet of attack ships was crippled.
Slowly, one by one, they dropped out of warp and regrouped fifty-three lightyears from the battleground they’d just run from. Ionic energy was still screwing with a few of their primary systems. Three ships lost, too. Three pilots dead. That was, according to their ancient interstellar laws, an act of war.
These Federations, who were they? Who were they to presume to build outposts overlooking their space? How dare they act with such defiance, like they had a claim to be there? And now sending a powerful starship to patrol the border? Did they really think they would go unchallenged?
They would not.
Slowly, the attack fleet banked around a red giant. The pilots were all looking forward to returning home. It always afforded them an impressive sight to behold, a glorious sight for such patriotic soldiers.
One after the other, they parted.
Each vessel would rendezvous with their carrier ship. Navigating the fleet was a maze, but they all knew where to go.
In total, there were almost one hundred carriers.
All preparing for war.



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Posted 03 June 2008 - 01:07 AM

Glenn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm so excited that you decided to post this. I'm going to love every single bleeding episode! Finally, the missing Trek in our lives!! WOOO HOOOO. I'm with trekfan who posted on my thread earlier - I might have to check into Trekkers Anonymous!

This was so, so good! The characters are fun, exciting and diverse! You even gave the Admiral a beard (thank you) and you even used the word cheeky! (Ok so those were silly things to notice - but I loved them just the same.)

Seriously. I'm just blown away at how much fun these are going to be!

Cannot wait to read more! Mmmmmmmmwah!

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Posted 03 June 2008 - 01:49 AM

View PostTerilynn, on Jun 2 2008, 08:07 PM, said:

Glenn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm so excited that you decided to post this. I'm going to love every single bleeding episode! Finally, the missing Trek in our lives!! WOOO HOOOO. I'm with trekfan who posted on my thread earlier - I might have to check into Trekkers Anonymous!

This was so, so good! The characters are fun, exciting and diverse! You even gave the Admiral a beard (thank you) and you even used the word cheeky! (Ok so those were silly things to notice - but I loved them just the same.)

Seriously. I'm just blown away at how much fun these are going to be!

Cannot wait to read more! Mmmmmmmmwah!


Seconded. Glenn, sweetness abound from this. I'm telling you, nice Trek series here. Like the episodes, quick, fun, and above all NEW. Unexplored territory...something that hasn't been done in trek for awhile. No going back, just forward...and yo didn't have to get lost in the delta quadrant to do it.

Look forward to the next installment of this series...who knows, paramount might stumble across this site one day and find they have a trek series waiting to be made.
Good stuff.

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Posted 03 June 2008 - 10:50 AM

I loved this, Captain Archer!!!! :thumbsup2: :thumbsup2: :thumbsup2: My favorite so far is your Vulcan doctor. :laugh: And I also like the captain (but he's a little too young, maybe... I just have a thing for older men, but hey, one can't always have everything)... AGAIN, an Englishman. :laugh: It's almost scary. LOL.

Keep on posting your episodes, I really, really love this new series. This is what Star Trek should be like. :thumbsup2:

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Posted 03 June 2008 - 02:07 PM

Wow, guys... I'm absolutely taken aback by your comments, you're so generous! Thank you so much!

The second episode will be up later on today or tomorrow morning, and the good news is that Episode #1 is the longest at ten pages of Word (the norm is eight/nine).

Your feedback is most welcome! Yes, Quarren's got a beard, Jed's English... it all works out! :thumbsup2:



Next time on Star Trek: Discovery...
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Jed proves his worth to the Sirrustra System and Starbase 499 by pulling a few strings and delving into his past, but his enthusiasm throws up some moral questions for the young Captain...
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Posted 03 June 2008 - 02:17 PM

View PostCaptain Archer, on Jun 3 2008, 04:07 PM, said:

Wow, guys... I'm absolutely taken aback by your comments, you're so generous! Thank you so much!

The second episode will be up later on today or tomorrow morning, and the good news is that Episode #1 is the longest at ten pages of Word (the norm is eight/nine).

Your feedback is most welcome! Yes, Quarren's got a beard, Jed's English... it all works out! :thumbsup2:



Next time on Star Trek: Discovery...
1x02: "Steamrunner"
Jed proves his worth to the Sirrustra System and Starbase 499 by pulling a few strings and delving into his past, but his enthusiasm throws up some moral questions for the young Captain...


Just make sure not to have an Englishman with a beard. :laugh:

And this really sounds exciting, I can't wait to read more about the young captain. :)

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